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Not bad could be longer

The humor was certainly funny, but in certain areas it could move a little faster. (Why not try making his crash an even BIGGER wipe out?)
The only thing was that it was incredibly short. Try adding some more joke next time and it will probably do better.

Bad just bad

I'll give you a three for effort. But mabye next time you could use a voice recorder and your own voice instead of that anoying computer voice. Try also having audio file in stream mode when you do a movie in 1 scene like this. Otherwise it might as you said "get raped". I might also suggest that you spend a little more time on the animations (Try color it adds alot).

Very nice

You obviously did a great job on the characters! Their detail is great and you were able to ragdoll animate them perfectly. Your jokes were origional and different. This is a great example of a funny flash cartoon. Good job.

not bad but not really animation

Although its a little interesting. It kinda felt like I was watching adult swim. The crazy cammera wears it'self out after awhile and the constant pill falling got to be a tad bothersome. But for humor I guess the idea was pretty good. You guys deffinately have some acting skill but I found not enough humor to make it that funny. On the other side this is something that was more or so made for youtube and not newgrounds. There was very litle adobe flash involvement that I could tell of, and it felt a little out there in it's humor. Try animating some of your skits and adding a few more jokes and I'm sure it will do very well on newgrounds.

FarFromSubtle responds:

Thanks for the insight dude! Check out some of our animated stuff right here on NG!

Epic

Truely a great animation. You my friend should show your work to some animating companys. You would so get a job there.

Very funny

Finally, this shows link's frustration of not having a voice. Good job man.

Ending ruined it.

The animation - Fluid
The voice acting- Great
The story -corny and funny
the ending- ....... Made me puke. Seriously, I still am cleaning it off the floor. I would have liked it better it he landed in something else like a evi dog yard or something to that extent.

BTW I think the rating should go from mild violence to heavy violence.

Funny but.... What?

I found it funny but you could have worked on the mouth a little better. Try synching it with the audio next time. And mabye try some different poses?

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